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JavaScript JavaScript Basics (Retired) Storing and Tracking Information with Variables The Variable Challenge

Posted by alessandradaudt
alessandradaudt
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My "Make a Story Game". Please review it!!

Here is a link to my game. Suggestions and corrections are more than welcome!!

http://codepen.io/ajuchem/details/OVwRKW

5 Answers

Niclas Valentiner
Niclas Valentiner
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Niclas Valentiner
Niclas Valentiner
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Decent little game but I'd suggest adding in a prompt for your sex too (being told I'm a girl is a tad odd). Perhaps a little hint about capitalization too?

Oh and since I just had to try and break it, consider looping the individual prompts until they get a non-empty value. Giving the game no input at all makes for a curious story.

Enjoy the results and praise.

alessandradaudt
alessandradaudt
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Hi Niclas, thank you for your response! I agree with you that the game needs improvement! But the exercise was about what we have learned so far (variables and concatenation) but I definately have your suggestions on my list once I start learning more! :)

Niclas Valentiner
Niclas Valentiner
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Niclas Valentiner
Niclas Valentiner
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Was just meant as "here are some things you can add to improve it." For whenever you can handle it and feel like doing it.

It's all just quality of life improvements that are good to get down early so they become second nature by later projects.

Nejc Vukovic
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Nejc Vukovic
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Nejc Vukovic
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Nejc Vukovic
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Works :)

Adding a humour Story would be a real day booster :)

Abe Layee
Abe Layee
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Abe Layee
Abe Layee
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Awesome:D Great work

Stephan Hoeksema
Stephan Hoeksema
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Stephan Hoeksema
Stephan Hoeksema
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Nice very funny!

Juan Aviles
Juan Aviles
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Juan Aviles
Juan Aviles
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I'm on this challenge right now, and wanted to see what others have come up with. Yours is great!